Nice job Meredith. Very cute idea. I love the "write on". Creative. The first image that you show is very hard to see. It's up on the screen for a long time and I can't even read it! It's either blurry or too small. Also, when the students speak, it's hard to hear them. They could use some type of microphone. And the last 20 seconds is just music! I am guessing that's a mistake? Nothing comes up on the screen. I like it though! Good job.
Meredith, this video was great! I like that you made it student friendly and very clear to understand. The only thing you many want to do is add some transition to your slides to keep the flow of your video moving. Also, when you are going over the checklist on the rubric, maybe a smiley face or check mar can appear under the "yes" column as you go through the points. Overall, really nce job!
That was the cutest introduction "write on" I wish the pictures were clearer. I came across the same issue with your audio being lower becasue you used your own students. I had my kids come closer and it seemed to record louder. I hope this helps :)
Hi Meredith, I really liked your video. Voice was good, children were adorable, and topic was informative and interesting. Two constructive comments, The posters that you had in the beginning were not clear, maybe you can take a zoom in shot of each part, they looked great and I really wanted to see them up close. The credits were a little small to read. As you can see comments really weren't about actual video which I thought was really good! Nice job!
nice job. The music was great, very peppy and the use of the students in the video was a good idea. One thing that I would suggest that you fix is the quality of the photographs. Other than that great job!
Rubrics are a great assessment tool to add to your classroom. Even better when the students understand the rubric and know what the teacher is expecting. Makes for clear expectations. Some of your pics were blurry and I had some difficulty hearing the little girl otherwise great job!
This video is so cute Meredith! I particularly love the "Write On" introduction with the students screaming out in unison! Nice touch- put a smile on my face right away. I also loved the "action" shot if the students with the mini interview. SO CUTE! My only critique, if you an call it that, is that i could not clearly see that picture of your poster. I could tell it is colorful and it looks interesting, but I cannot make out what it actually says. It was a little too blurry. Oh, and the music in the end fit nicely with the rest of your video. Maybe you could have incorporated the names of your "stars" as ending credit. Nice job!
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Nice job Meredith. Very cute idea. I love the "write on". Creative. The first image that you show is very hard to see. It's up on the screen for a long time and I can't even read it! It's either blurry or too small. Also, when the students speak, it's hard to hear them. They could use some type of microphone. And the last 20 seconds is just music! I am guessing that's a mistake? Nothing comes up on the screen. I like it though! Good job.
Meredith, this video was great! I like that you made it student friendly and very clear to understand. The only thing you many want to do is add some transition to your slides to keep the flow of your video moving. Also, when you are going over the checklist on the rubric, maybe a smiley face or check mar can appear under the "yes" column as you go through the points. Overall, really nce job!
That was the cutest introduction "write on" I wish the pictures were clearer. I came across the same issue with your audio being lower becasue you used your own students. I had my kids come closer and it seemed to record louder. I hope this helps :)
Hi Meredith,
I really liked your video. Voice was good, children were adorable, and topic was informative and interesting. Two constructive comments, The posters that you had in the beginning were not clear, maybe you can take a zoom in shot of each part, they looked great and I really wanted to see them up close. The credits were a little small to read. As you can see comments really weren't about actual video which I thought was really good! Nice job!
nice job. The music was great, very peppy and the use of the students in the video was a good idea. One thing that I would suggest that you fix is the quality of the photographs. Other than that great job!
Rubrics are a great assessment tool to add to your classroom. Even better when the students understand the rubric and know what the teacher is expecting. Makes for clear expectations. Some of your pics were blurry and I had some difficulty hearing the little girl otherwise great job!
This video is so cute Meredith! I particularly love the "Write On" introduction with the students screaming out in unison! Nice touch- put a smile on my face right away. I also loved the "action" shot if the students with the mini interview. SO CUTE! My only critique, if you an call it that, is that i could not clearly see that picture of your poster. I could tell it is colorful and it looks interesting, but I cannot make out what it actually says. It was a little too blurry. Oh, and the music in the end fit nicely with the rest of your video. Maybe you could have incorporated the names of your "stars" as ending credit. Nice job!
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